you ar goed
hoop dat you gonne meek moor
i bie loeking voorwordt toe thed
you gat wat it thik toe bie goed at this
you gat mijn 5 voor this
Graphics: I don't give credit to graphics when it's a bunch of sprites you didn't make. So I judge by whatever additional effects and images that I know you did add in.
Style: NewGrounds is saturated with these things. And most of them are done better. While you have composition and backgrounds looking good, and it provides a lot of scenery, the actual delivery is slow and boring to me.
Sound: It lines up and is appropriate, so it adds very well to this.
Violence: Never liked this grading mechanic.
Interactivity: Just a play button in the beginning and a scene selection, but that's about it.
Humor: This is what I wanted to get to. I just didn't find it funny, even though it tried to be. I feel that it could have been delivered in a lot less time, much more easily, and omitted a lot of the grandeur stuff. The movie itself is not timed very well.
Overall: There are a lot of shining examples of Mario parodies done correctly. This one doesn't seem to push the boundaries, let alone, aspire to the current standard.
Another ond who didn't find the easter eggs...
I liked that so much.
how you did that I'll never know.
Really nice to read you liked it!^^
You didn't find the easter eggs yet, did you? Take a look for them!^^
PS: Forgive me for responding that late!^^
you sure know how to make a great flash. Make more and I'll vote 5!
There will be more! Unfortunatly I'm not very fast at making flashes so it's gonna take a while to finish the next episode...
I dislike mario marodys, but this was fine...
One thing though.. try increasing your frame rate, it was really 'cutty'..
Nice work. Claytron.
Nice to read that you liked this one after all!
Increasing the frame rate would be rather difficult because of the 16000 frame limit... This movie has about 19000 frames because I made the credits, the 3rd easter egg and the menu as MCs to avoid to have about 16000 frames... that's also why you can't stop while this scenes... sorry!
But thanks anyway because your advice will be usefull when I'll make a short or something...