maybe u should strengthen the message
It was very hard to see the message. and a key element of any short presentation is to bring the message on quickly & openly. you have only a few seconds to portray what you're trying to say. and each second is another 5-25 frames that you have to create to keep your message going. all in all though you brought a good effect with a great drawing style. and use of colour wasn't needed to create emotion. you did it with raw talent. well done.
Don't get me wrong... awsome animation... but... I don't know it just didn't click... I didnt get what the man represented or why he was walking or what the tree was supposed to mean... kinda boring... but really good animation.
Not too shabby
Hell. I liked it. Pretty artistic. Gives the viewer a chance to infer their own meaning from it. The sound was a bit muffled and could use some sprucing up. But mostly good.
vary nice. could add more sound to make it better though.
Yeah, this wasn't bad, I liked it somewhat.