This was quite a good movie
I figured after you reviewed one of my best movies a 0 for no apparent reason I'd give your stuff a look, and its actually well done. You do your own original artwork, an original concept and plot, I imagine you did your own voice acting, and it had a decent amount of humor. I'm sorry you've sort of been shafted because you make these good movies that virtually go unnoticed, which is probably why you went on a tirade on my flash because you figure we get all our publicity easy because of name recognition of the group and people like Illwillpress who have name recognition for pumping out the same thing 50+ times.
As for advice for this flash, I noticed the file size is a bit large for something of this nature. For the sound files you use, do you stream them and for music files do you edit the export quality to 16kbps instead of the imported mp3 quality? Otherwise, I wouldn't know what would drive it up that high other than sound.
However, good flash nonetheless and keep up the good work. Please just don't go around bashing people like me because you have something against the Lock Legion and Clock Crew. ;)