Nice entry you have here, I realize you were aiming for a certain style with this, and thats cool and it has come out kind of unique, it was an interesting flash submission, and I was drawn to this, so I was not easily bored with this, would like to see more of this and see it go furhter and even deeper, while still keeping some quality to it. ok so this was interesting, the art on the characters was pretty impressive and the "EFFECTS" were even better, all around a good job here, this did seem kind of short more like a "TRAILER" of shorts. I really look forward to seeing more stuff like this, untill then keep working on great stuff. nothing else to say except keep up the effort in this one and future flash stuff you have planned.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I Encourage you on some of these ideas, it will ad more Exposure So there can be alot of different things you can do to improve on things But maybe all this really needs is some tweeks and some possible new situations but maybe you can try a few suggested things. I would ad a tad more bit of content to give more detail on whats going on or going to see, something to give the viewers something to be waiting for in any type of full version.