Don't feel down!
This is absolutely awesome.
Your attention to detail is great, and your art is amazing, if not AS refined as Adam Phillips' linework. But then again, he has had a lot more practice and used to work for Disney.
You have gotten very close to his greatness, but this submission should be allowed to stand by itself. It has it's own grandeur.
It should make it to the front page and get lots of views. Be happy!
P.S. I know everyone else is telling you this, but a backing track would be nice for the main part of the toon, and if you want sound effects, try out findsounds dot com.