Hey, this is my first-ever Flash animation project. I've already finished my second effort (which I'll upload later), but I figured I'd start simple <g>.
I'm still learning the ins and outs of Flash animation, so constructive criticism is much appreciated.
And thanks for looking!
Funny,
notbad on this short animation you should add more to it though, More humor, some more funny jokes here and there, some visual humor such as rolling eyes and so on. It was very short, so in that type of flash why not either add more content or you could make a flash with a number of short flashes like this one or even adding it as a part of some collab would be good aswell.
~X~
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THE GOOD
It was okay. I like them mideval fantasy creatures and what do you know this had one.; I liked the intro too. It was pretty pimp. Some okay fbf animation to. And I guess it was okay funny.
THE BAD
It wasnt laugh out loud funny. And there were a lot of other flaws. Like when you did the overview of him it looked so incredibly stupid its not even funny. And last of all what the hell was this supposed to be about. I mean wtf. I dont get it.
Thanks for your input. Hey, I know it wasn't the funniest thing in the history of animation -- I just wanted to produce _something_ while teaching myself Flash.
And what was it about ... um ... er ... some demons are just too big to ride the bus. Tragic, but true. <g>
Funny + Cute
It was funny and cute same time, but I think you just need to add a little more details to the drawings, such as the grass and whatever else there maybe.
Short but..
Short but i actually thought the animation was really cute ^^
I liked it..next time just make it a little bit more longer and put a proper storyline into it ^^
Simple but raised a smile
Favourite bit was the dragon ate the duck.
Simple, nice little piece Susan. Keep at it...