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This is our first flash movie. We are hoping to turn this into a series.
Any constructive criticism will be appreciated and will be taken into account.
This was a very nice flash. Well animated and pretty funny. I cant wait to see the next in the series. I think I see a little TN inspiration in there though. I dont care though because I love TN. Please make the next one faster.
The intro was much to long. I mean we watch the movie for the movie and I can not imagine myself needing to watch that on every episode. Also what were those bumps coming out of their jeans. Look. Guys cant have any peanus showing while wearing jeans. And even if they were wearing loos shorts it would only show if they were having an errection so I suggest you get rif of the T bag.
stop trying to rip of TN
Using the concept of Flatmates is not owned by TN, it is a easy way to start of series. Our jokes were inspired by ourselves and moments that have happened, imagined by ourselves.
there is no flying oven in TN.
>>Or bums who are main characters>>
I'll give yah some constructive critism
Heres a list of critisms i comprised from looking at this flash.
a)there chests stick out to much (looks like boobs.)
b)Title is very forgettable and logo is poorly drawn.
c)Way too much feedback when talking (also heard some keyboard in the backround at one point)
d)song cuts out to abruptly should fade out.
e)In one scene one of the characters is bigger than a house( if you look at it as a perspective thing the house would have to be about 100 feet away)
f)Lazy animation (most of the time the characters are standing completely still while there lips move, also they didn't have any elbow joints)
g)why was he speaking to the bum in tongues?
h)incosistent sound levels, ihad to adjust my volume way too much.
i)each character's personality is just a varying degree of stupidity.
j)the only jokes were "Man that was totally random" jokes.
k)very poorly paced (which seems resonable considering the credits show the cartoon was written by nobody i guess you made it up as you went along.)
That's my honest critism most of it is fact not opinion so don't troll me.
The "tounge" is our drunken hobo language (DHL) thanks for the criticism. Yes an about the credits... we forgot.
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what are you a nazi!? round eyes man! ROUND EYES! otherwise nice work.
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