4/10
While it wasn't a great game, it shows you have potential, and even the best started out somewhere.
You say you're twelve, and I must say that for someone your age, you type in a very intelligent way. That's a rare thing to see these days, where even 21 year olds type like "omg u r teh stuped."
Keep getting better, and don't let bad reviews distract you from what you can eventually become.