A lot of potential.
You have a lot of potential I can see by the backgrounds, and the quality of the clock dudes, but why waste it on such boring stuff?
5points are from the details of the flash, 1 is from the amused smile and smirks from teh chain of dancing pirate bottles, and the mr.charlie thing at the end.
Make something without clocks, and put a lot of effort in it. Don't draw randomly like a 12 year old child who's mentally challenged.
And quit the flashing screen stuff, warn people about that, because some people are epileptic.