I loved it, the story caught my attention but lamentaby some scenes were gawky.
Thanks to Tom Fulp for letting me submit this & Frontpage! I appreciate it.
http://www.geocities.com
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First and foremost, this is a re-edited version of my last flash movie (This is NOT stolen!). This contains about 40 seconds of new animation, edited scenes, tweaked drawings, etc. Consider this canon, and the last one experimental (if you've seen it). I'm about 95% complete the next episode, so that should be out very soon. If you have any questions, I'll do my best to answer them. I would greatly appreciate it if I get lots of feedback!
Note: All done in flash 5 (I really need to get Flash 8!!)
-If you're not confident about your computer, then set the quality to medium or low-
I loved it, the story caught my attention but lamentaby some scenes were gawky.
asome
but need to work on size and sounds
cool
im an anime lover, but graphics couldve been better, edges could be smoother, colors were not bad, but it could be more natural, as in the textures, some of the characters should have other kinds of skin colors other than pale/white, tan or peach maybe, at least? the animation part can also be improved since it looked a bit choppy. hang in there, youre almost there
wow
i realy enjoyed it but i personaly liked the music choses better it was awesome don;t get me wrong but the voice actors could have done a better job
pretty good
it was damn good work but the voice acting on some lines felt they were rushed out of the persons mouth