for flash animation that was incredible...it would help if the story was more played out but besides that, well done
seems good and all, just kinda scratchy >_>
THat was amazing! Although, you need to work on the voice levels, as Kintrada said, you did great on the animation! I loved the plot and the music. When they showed the girl, right after it said," 15 Years Later" was that song from Ghost in the Shell? It seems familiar :P
10 out of 10 " Great!!!! "
Good all round cept...
work on teh voice levels, some are far too loud some are too soft
sound effects were too soft as far as the guns went, if you dont want to work
on that then slap some silencers one em or something
animation and action were great, i like the plot so far...though... be careful
the line between tried and true plot devices and cliches is thin, so far youve
stayed on the good side of that line but stay focused
Nothing all to amazing here, it has a good story line and descent animation styles. But it needs work in the sound department and some visual editing. A solid flash none the less.