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No sir, I didn't like it.
Started out as an obvious spoof, went from crap town to crap castle, and wtf was the hand shadow crap about? did your attention span run out or what?
I blam thee.
it was fair
The graphics were average. You should work on the voice acting. Overall this was average.
Its well done...
You have skill and its fairly well done, so I voted for this to stay.
As far as technical concerns go, your only real problem (aside from overall polishing) was sound quality, but I have no doubt you'll eventually get proper mic technique so its not so breathy and hard to understand. On the upside, the music was pretty good.
For story though...I don't know, I love Beowulf, but besides using the names, I don't think your flash was even close. I know you were trying to be funny and so you changed stuff, but...you changed everything. Also, it wasn't funny, except the end with the hand puppets.
I'd love to go nitpick all the little things, but I think I've already been enough of a geek for this review.
Now, go make fun of those awful greek epics (Homer = BORING) and leave the good ones alone! I better not catch you doing Gilgamesh, Prose Edda, or the Nibelungenlied!
Great graphics up until the end. Your animation of the knights and scenery was excellent. It seems you started right in the middle of the epic and didn't have a beginning or an end. Clearly you showed you have the talent and skill to animate the entire story, but I can imagine the amount of work it would take. I'm assuming you got lazy in the end which is understandable. It would be really cool though if you went all out and did everything.
nice flash and everything, well made and stuff.. but it would've been better if it wasn't for the crappy ending.
Four dwarven leaders in search for ancient treasure.
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Goofy dies. Sora cries.
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