That was some funny stuff
It was funny. The cast of characters was well developed. I thought that your characters were very cute. Almost too cute.
The flow of the overall movie was choppy. At some points the audio was softer than at other points, so work on that. Clean up your preloader.
Not too bad for a 2nd flash. So to encourage you I'm going to give you an overall score of 10, although because of some minor problems it really should have gotten closer to a 7.