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Strain your Eyes: TWSM

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Aug 20, 2006 | 8:05 AM EDT

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I'm unsure what I was thinking. Though I'm still just experimenting with flash. I tried making a movie in the smallest space I could and this came out. I do have a proper movie in the making and this was a nice break. When it doesnt do well I'll remove it from the portal. But I wanted thoughts on the idea.



Rated 5 / 5 stars


You used my song ;)

<3 u


Rated 3 / 5 stars

I've seen something even smaller...

...but that was on clock day. Overall quite nice idea, the endings too, but this isn't that great.

-Sounds. Really liked the music, just awesome.
-Many endings, totally great. You could only have put the choosing screen a bit later, wasn't there in every one "I'm sick of you fighting!"?
-Humor, sure. Though I didn't have to strain my eyes, really.

-Storyline. Well, at least there was one, but it was just so basic, nothing original.
-Style and graphics, well, they weren't exactly bad, but a bit below par.

Overall: Almost everything was ok, that would have made this not really good. The different endings and small size were a plus, so overall not bad.

Scothou responds:

I actually made the flash about half the size it shows on NG. On here its about 200 x 400 whereas its actually made at 100 x 200. That idea didn't quite work as planned. I'm glad you liked it at least and if I make another I know what I have to change.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


Good Stuff:

It was funny, and the third ending was waaaaaaay too funny.

Bad stuff:

The graphics aren't that good, and the style either. Also you should make the voices in audio instead of in text.



Rated 4 / 5 stars


That was an enjoyable movie. Good job.
I would suggest that you make the alternate ending choices available before the titles. It's kind of a pain having to wait through the titles (even though they are short) to get to that option page. Also since each alternate ending starts with the same part of 'I'm sick of your figthing', you should include that as part of the main movie and have the alternates starting after that. It's rather boring seeing that part repeat with each ending choice.
Keep up the good work. :)


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


great idea