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Jim: His Hidden Life

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Okay, first off, the story is confusing, so here's an overview of it.

Story Overview-
Jim has a secret notebook that keeps all of his drawings, which are REALLY good, mind you. So one day, when he's in this other world, where he has this amazing drawing ability, he is almost caught, he doesn't want to be caught because he didn't know if his friends would like this new world he found, he feared they would shun it.

Okay, that should help you guys understand better, not that you wouldn't it's just... nevermind. Anyway, this is the longest cartoon I've ever made, so it's really a kind of special thing for me. Sorry about the file size, I did keep it under 5 megs though, so that's good. Well, enjoy!

© Jimtopia 2006

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O.o

wow..
just, wow...
definately the one I've seen so far...


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Jimtopia responds:

This is definitely the one you've seen so far?


Best

Your best one!


Jimtopia responds:

XD That's what your other review said!


Fantastic

definatly one of your best work


Jimtopia responds:

I'm glad you liked it. I don't. >_>


Whilst I know this is Crunk fo' Shuggle...

... whatever that means, I see what you meant about difficult to understand. since this is an important flash you should think about expressing it a bit differently- working on it to make the story go better. You surely know that subs shouldn't rely on explantions in the notes.
Its good, its got good music.
I would make the sky lighten toward the horizon in all the scenes, I think it looks better. Take a look at mine if you like and see what you think.
Best wishes,
Ice


Jimtopia responds:

I was thinkin' about redoing this one, but not anytime in the near future. I'm glad you think it's good. Hmm, so make the sky get lighter towards the horizon? Aight. Thx for the review.


great as usual. but...

1st off....WHY DIDNT I KNOW OF THIS?! im furious
so heres my review...
Graphics: better than normal for some reason, but i was lost through this whole movie. please explain?
Style: confusing
Sound: Japanese
Violence: none
Interactivity: none
Humor: confusing
Overall:GREAT


Jimtopia responds:

Whoops, sry, forgot to tell you! Lol, I also have a cartoon called JimSpin out you could review, lol. I don't think this toon deserved a ten though. Thx for the review.

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Uploaded
Aug 19, 2006
2:00 PM EDT
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Drama