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Black ep 2

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After about a week, here's episode 2. In this episode, Black explores the forest outside his house. enjoy.

Reviews


Good Work!

This was very cool. Some minor things like him missing his outline when bending down and getting up. but other than that i loved it, especially when he ate that poor little bug.



not bad

good job on it.. i like the music.



Very good.

Good stuff:

Great graphics. The Style was smooth as well, I coun't ever do that good.

Bad stuff:

Nothing really bad, exept it didn't really make much sense. Whatever, it's very close to perfect. :)

Peace.


gotix responds:

Thanks, but the makin sense thing is kinda on purpose. I really want this flash to mean something different to each person that wtches it. =D


work on it

I'm giving you a 5 cause I think you can do better, this could actually become a good series, just keep working on your animation specially the backgrounds.



potential o'matic

your characters were super cute, and you had excelent pacing, but your animation technique was a bit rough. work on your rain and your characters' interaction with the landscape. depth of field (3d-natude) would also help


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Credits & Info

Views
2,194
Votes
242
Score
3.32 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 19, 2006
1:30 PM EDT
Genre
Drama