Hey guys, This is our new Animation We hope you will like it, Sorry about the audio, Everything is done, accept voices, we will do that once we get a mic.. But we wanted to know what people thought about it first, plz comment its very well appreciated =] thanks for your support!
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~~REVIEW~~
well notbad on this its was neat i liked the animation and all could use more backround effects with more color aswell, it wasa decent little animation though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color enhancements would be nice.
~~OVERALL~~
A decent animation, could use some improving on stuff here and there though.
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not bad, in fact, it's pretty good.
I really like your style, well done, but there are some points that I'd like to ...welll... point out to you (stupid expression).
- Your drawings are really good, but the difference between the full view of the girl and the close-ups of the faces are kinda weird. Your style is so much different then, that it makes me wonder if two different people did the movie. I think the movie would look much more professional if you'd stick to one style.
- the movements and scene changings are a bit edgy. Try smoothing them out with fade in and fade outs.
- the sound. ^.^ ah, I don;t think I have to say that. Vice acting would make this movie rock the world.
I hope to see the full movie soon,
Kaori himoru
we understand what you mean with the different styles, 2 people did make this movie, we'll keep the style in mind, hmm never used fade in and outs, i dont know, ill try them once i figure it out lol, thansk for the comment, gonna get a mic soon, to improve it much more! ^_^
short but sweet
It was too short really all you need to do to make this flash really great is add some time on to it explain a little more of it. Oh and in the next one it would be great if you had voices. I liked the sketched out look of it very cool especially the angel in the loading screen.
Yeah, it was short because it wasn't done fully, we just wanted to see what we needed to do to improve the video so that we can make it better, we're getting a mic soon, that would improve the video more, and adding in longer scenes then this, im glad you liked it, drawing angel's is our's masterpiece! thanks for the comment ^_^
interesting . . .
i found this one pretty interesting even though it was pretty short. i like how it's drawn out, it gives the whole story this, this feeling to what the girl is feeling. at least, that's how i felt. i don't know if anyone else felt that. it does help if you have a mic. short stuff like this really need voice overs instead of text. is it supposed to be longer, because i have this feeling that this part has more to it than just what was shown. but that's just me. can't wait for the next part.
We're glad you figured the feeling out ^_^. Yeah we hope we can get a mic soon, well this is just the beginining, bcuz we didnt have mic or anything, we could have drawn it out longer, but we dont want to mess up the whole thing for everyone :), so just a short clip just to see what touches we need to do to improve it more, then we will put a full series out ^_^, thanks for the comment, we appreciate it very much.
Quite well done
You should really get a mic though. It helps.