It was kind of funny,
but I actually enjoyed the reading of the poem to the random interruption. Perhaps you could make another flash from this that is just the poem?
it was good but
i really couldn't hear the man's voice over the super loud clock. I enjoyed it because i already knew what he was saying but i would have enjoyed it more if i could hear him better.
If it was any better, it would be worse. fifend. Good work. Win.
Ohshi Effect Credits
I assumed my effect would be for a black and white movie. I guess it doesn't matter; looks fine anyways.
Poor, poor Peggey.