hmmm
The fighting was alright, but as it has been said you need more frames.
The story on the other had needs a lot of work. Although it is nice to add background your story telling lacks.
GL
Author Comments
This is my first real movie, and also my first series.
Right now, I'm in the process of making the characters lines thicker.
So please, review this movie and tell me how to make it better.
For the next movie all characters will be the same size. This series will not only show Black and his adventures but also show my improvements with flash and animation in general.
Have fun!
-Fremen13
pretty good!
very good for a first entry!
if you need any custom music for the next one let me know......
Fremen responds:
Thanks.
At this rate, there might or might not be a second.
The beginning was made over christmas vacation, but a combination of not finding music (which you could help with) and being lazy and making the fps relly slow made production slow and the quality horrible.
I'll finish it this summer.
it was pretty cool
the fighting was cool but it was hard to tell wat was happening and what the guys were doing
Fremen responds:
Thats why I used two differnt colord people, but next time I'm going to do some three D animation and try to have a dynamic background, so it'll be easier to distinguish.
A lost treasure?
No not really, but a decent stick flash though i must admit. You have done well Fremen, but you must do more if you want to please the gods. Always remember that Justice, courage and love always triumphs!
Fremen responds:
I'm not going to call you a God.
No matter how much you suck my dick....I mean....suck up to me.....
Not too bad for a first!
As far as stick flashes go, it's very choppy and the fighting rather slow. But despite that, I can see that you put a nice amount of attention to detail in there. :) I like the fact that you decided to provide a back story and not just do mindless fighting, lol.
Are you going to buy a license to Flash so you can continue the series? I hope so. Makenai! (don't give up!)
Fremen responds:
Thanks. I'm gonna get a copy of Flash from my friend, so I will probably do one or two animations over the summer.
I'll try to continue this series, so you can look forward to Black 2 and 3. Also, I'll probably get better as it goes. The best example I can think of is Xin. In the beginning it was ok, but at the end, it was amazing.
