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Canada dry clock vs Sbc!!

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Comedy - Original
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Uploaded
Aug 15, 2006 | 4:32 PM EDT

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hmmmmmmmmm canada dry!
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Not offical clock yet
Thank you everyone for your support!

Reviews


CojinCojin

Rated 0 / 5 stars

umm

this is just bad i mean really bad



SpookyMuffinsSpookyMuffins

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Boring!!!

Wow! What a waste of my time!!



OmgeeOmgee

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Suggestions....

Consider taking some tutorials on Flash. Below that same link you clicked to submit your flash is a little link that says, "LEARN FLASH." Follow that link and you'll find a bunch of tutorials on how to make your animations look and sound good. Do some of those tutorials and your next effort should be a lot better.

Your flash needs a preloader. On the Newgrounds Flash Portal page, there's a link right below the "Submit" button that says, "GET NG LOADERS N' STUFF!" Click that link to download a .FLA with a preloader in it. Copy and paste the first frame of that into your animation, and you'll have a preloader, complete with a start button.

Your file size was really large, most likely because you did not compress your sound. To learn how to optimize your audio, click the "LEARN FLASH" link below the "submit" button on the portal page, then click "audio optimization" -- it's near the top of the tutorials section.

This flash had no background, so the action took place in a vast void of nothingness. Think about adding backgrounds to your next flash.

Your flash didn't really tell a story or demonstrate any kind of meaning or purpose. While "random" can be good if done well, you might consider adding some kind of a plot or story line to your next flash.

Hope that helps. Good luck with your next flash!


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blamown3g responds:

would ushut up and stop copying and pasting this


phupangphupang

Rated 0 / 5 stars

suck

suck,suck,suck,blam this piece of crap



GoOdCoNtEnTGoOdCoNtEnT

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I don't get it

I don't get it