You are great person but your flash animation needs some work. Still at least you wern't like the other clock day movies, putting on 3 seconds of crap and hoping you get voted 5.
You are what I call an ametur, you seem to know how to master the flash waves but can't master it yet.
Sort your animation out and sort out your sound, when you were doing the voices, I could hear the background, sort it out and I will be happy. Oh last thing, if you need to improve your sound make sure you but some more better quality speakers. BbBbBbbBb