crap!!!!!!!!!
man this sucks!
Author Comments
MICHEAL EH
M
!HOOOOOH
TheOneFoot responds:
UR GAY OK
ookey..
Well...first things first you should improve the style a LOT...and some better voices, tell character's names, the evil smiley's name. And stuff like that. But anyway it can get better if you try a bit.
TheOneFoot responds:
Micheal is Micheal
Zaldar is Zaldar
California is California
Pirate Ball is mysterious so d
