First thing I noticed were the pinty waves, as I would suggest curving them out a bit next time. The rest of the background looked pretty good, if a bit crude. Of course, the sea voyage part lasted way longer than it should have considering nothign really happened. Then you go and end the flash with a picture and music, which knocked the rating down a bit.
SEA VOYAGES TAKE AS LONG TIME ASSHOL
It was beautiful, happy clock day
i <3 you!
I laughed....I cried........I got fucking HIV and Herpes. Thanks alot man. FUCKING 5 all the way Soup. <3 -Fork