relly touching and inspiring, sad too, that last guy who posted doesnt know what he's talking about, it's obvious you're not giving orders to people as how to live their own lives, your suggesting something that people may or may not believe in, great touching story i gave it a 5/5
That was really good for a first flash! I agree completely with the moral, too.
Pleas check over your typos. I wasn't really trying to find any, but found "Technologie," which is supposed to be Technology (Technologies if plural). Aksi, scientisets were reaching a roof? I don't think this is correct, but maybe it is where you are from :/ Strange phrase, but whatever. Then there was "Attrakted." NO! Attracted I believe? You are way off :P Then, "Just don't hurt anyone and we will be all fine." Was this a quote? The phrase is supposed to go "and we'll be all RIGHT."
Now, besides all these typos, I believe it is wrong to tell people how to live thier lives. If they want to be religious, let them. If they don't want to be, let them...be non-religious, don't tell people they have to neglect God just because you do. Also, no, my life does not revolve around God, so I am not speaking in anger, like you just dissed my religion or something, so don't say that. I just feel you shouldn't act like a natzi and give orders.
yeah your right, I should have paid better attention at the text, although I spelled scientist ok... I should have wrote scientists though.
And I am not really telling people what to do, I am just giving personal advice on how I would look at life.
I dont see how you would think I am giving orders, its just point of view I am expressing
first, whats carpe diem mean? (i heard it somewhere b4)
2nd, you shoud make the text a different colour or shade cuz its hard to read.
Carpe diem means seize the day, a latin proverb that replaced the saying: memento mori, which means remember to die..
your right on the text, I just hope it was readable
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this kinda idea always catchs my attention, as i dont belive in a single relgion i think tehy all have some truth and ya but anyway back to the flash. the graphic were really good for your first i was kinda surprised when i watched it! i think you should make some thign else along these lines would be great :D