It was more of a slideshow than a flash. It was hard to read the text over some of the backgrounds, use a higher contrast color next time. The plot was ok, but really doesn't have an impact in a one minute flash. Perhaps if you worked on a story engage the viewer and really draw them in the ending would really hit them with an impact.
Ok for a first movie...
You should work on spelling and grammar a bit more if you're going to subtitle a movie. You should also maybe build a little more background and details into the story next time.
That really didnt make any sence.
haha :) why not??
Idea is good.
Would make a great RPG. Nice thinking.
It wasnt really funny, but the grapgics were quite good, sound was fine, i was half expecting something to jump out and attack the guy, i dont know if you ment the end speach to be funny but it was for me. Not a bad first attemp