Um, no offense, but if the background noise was the music, I'm not all too interested in the website. It seems like you're going for a slightly more gothic Salad fingers, and no offense, I'm a bit picky about styles, so that did bring down your score a bit. I like to see people try for their own styles. Anyway, I couldn't hear the little kid over the background noise except for 'Pretty', 'Raven', 'Surprise', and 'You'. But it did flow at least and you didn't get garbage apearing one second, vanishing the next, and yet again apearing over and over again like on a rather bad old movie real. Anyway, it just takes time and practive so keep at it. Maybe make it to where there's a tiny bit more to the story line. Just keep in mind that if people have to listen to something like the background noise in it, it's going to be too painfull to the ears. Like nails on a chalkboard. ^_^ Keep working on it! You'll make something better, I know it.
thank you for being the only person on newgrounds to use good music. And the animation was phenominal also.