Same kind of story as the first submission: 'Sjef finds a Present' But a bit longer than that. Enjoy and please review this submission so I can learn about what you NG-people like :)
Greetings from Holland,
Ralf Silvius
(title in work)
I wasn't too impressed by this. It was for the most part colorless, and there really wasn't a whole lot to color in here, because you didn't have much in terms of background or small details throughout this. The slow moving animations, mixed with the boring background and the sounds of night really just made me tired.
Ok
THE GOOD
It had a little story. And for some reason I just kinda liked it. It was kind of cute I guess I could say. It had some nice sound effects to.
THE BAD
In the intro the blood went from pink to red. What was that? It was black and white pluss the charecter wasnt walking on any ground. And it could use some background music. And what was with the charecters not having arms or legs or even a neck.
ROFL
I laughed in some parts but u should add some more color and maybe when he threw the rock there should have been a window? and please add a replay button it gets aggrovating going back to just watch the movie overall good for a first flash
3/5
Thanx for your advice, I'll take your advice and think about it. You're talking about missing a replay button, but there is already one at the end, after all the credits you can click and play the movie again without an intro. If the button doesn't work, please tell me and I'll fix it.
sjef get's ''rocked''! :P
hey, hey! daar ben ik weer! XD
wederom wel een vet filmpje, alles was vet vloeiend enzo:P ik vond het wel een relaxt filmpje. wederom een 4/5!
greetz, Totghelyr
Thanx again ;)
Chill filmpje
Een 5, mooie graphics en shit. Plus je bent Nederlands :D
Goeie reden, vooral die laatste ;)
