Music
Was absolutely amazing, the best part of the whole flash. give it some work, and you'll go far.
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This is my first Flash. Please, review and tell me what you think. The music is Bach's Unaccompanied Cello Suite no. 6.
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I don't know what you were trying to do with this animation, if it was supposed to be funny or if it was supposed to be touching or sad or whatnot. The animation was not wonderful and the story was even more not wonderful.
4/10 for you
Not bad
Excellent for your first try. If you keep at it, I can gauruntee you, you will succeed here. Hope to see more from you in the future!
decent
for a first flash you didn't do half bad, just make sure theres more subtle detail in there, like when he shoved hte bomb down his throat in the dream. you shoulda made it so that his mouth would actually takem the bomb instead of it just disapearing.
Goatyman responds:
Thanks for the tip...
Not half bad for a first
Keep at it and give yourself a pat on the back.