Notbad

Well its notbad, i liked it though, and allthough it could use some slight improving like more animation, and maybe abit compressing overall it was a good start in the right direction, nice job though hope to see more soon.

~X~

You've got the right idea but...

I can see your fingers... Also, you might want to make the talking screen a little fancier inseted of some white lines and words. Better luck next time bud.

~PRSF

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I liked how it was a silent movie

I liked the whole idea, but I just think it could've been done better... I really did like how you had the speech in the silent movie-type screens. Good luck with everything you do.

Ho ho

Whilst this wasn't brilliant, I must say I kinda liked it. This is probs due to the fact it reminds me of my art exam painting last year. Decent job, although it dosn't really show off any ability to use flash (and the film was a bit fuzzy). Maybe next time try animation as opposed to live action?