Way to much conversation
It seemed like you were trying to make fun of some sort of nonexistant feature in the tooth series, that being that they constantly blab on about boring material that no one cares about, and then breaks on to some musical where its just a tween of their mouths.
Then again, knowing the starsyndicate, im pretty sure this is supposed to be shitty as a joke. I ca't tell lol, and im sure you wont read this since this was made in 2006, but seriously the animation needs improvement, cut out all those tweens.