Some suggestions for future movies...
It was a nice attempt, but I think you could do better with some practice.
*Even if you're a terrible voice-actor, it's still better than that awful computer voice. If you don't have a microphone, there are literally hundreds of thousands of people on the internet who would love to send you THEIR voice-acting if you send them a script.
*Spend more time drawing, and study some of the general shapes used in other works.
*Slow. The fuck. Down.
Do all of that, and you should be alright. Also, trust me on this, or at least ask some other people if THEY agree with me, because I'm sure they will.