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Hi people, This is LolRag 5
Be sure to watch LR4 before...
I tried to fix some little bugs but in the end it finished with even more bugs, damn, now it's all fixed up, sorry for everything! (damn it!)
This one, in resume, is just about a little more past and how Shyro lost his eye... The fight in this one is no longer than 1,5 sec hehe, the history is getting better and in 6 and 7, in my opinion the fight gets awesome... I'll submit 6 asap.
Thanks a lot to everybody and I guess that's it. See ya!
well done again
another great little movie from you..
I have enjoyed watching every single one...
Keep up this good work.. You'll soon be truely amazing :)
H-Saito responds:
A...Are you serious? @_@
Thanks a lot !! @_@ since many few people seemed to like my flashs... Thanks!!
Nicely Done!
I really appreciate you taking all the time and effort to make this flash. Your craftsmanship really shows. Keep up the good work!
H-Saito responds:
Thanks a LOT! Sinse someone really liked it ! Thanks, thanks and thanks!
Add Movement
This would be a great flash production if there was more movement and less still pictures. Try to add some movement or a different picture of something throughout the dialogue. And also it is confusing because as the audience reading subtitles we do not know who is speaking right away. We have to use a lot of our own common sense to figure out who the leader and the follower are. But the story is good and kind of interesting just try to add something a little bit more to it. movement and excitment instead of a contiuning thing in the beginning. The fact that the beginning is so stationary will turn a lot of people away and they will not want to watch the end where things start to get interesting and you demonstarte more movement and actual flash talent. With those thoughts in mind keep making flash productions.
H-Saito responds:
Thanks a lot! I know it's too boring when nothing happens... I'm sorry, after all... I'm thinking int adding voices to it, but, since I'm brazilian I wouldn't do great voices and just few friends know english enought to speak... but I'll try to do something more than just people sitted and everything like this... Thanks!
hum...
The story line is aite but...
Well... I've no problem with sprite flashes... as long as they do something. But it's just a still picture with text on the bottem... Nothing to look at except words.
Nor do you really know who is talking at all really...
Maybe if people moved or something it'd be good? (aside from the part where they're walking/fighting, which looks like you just took a video of the game in process)
It's also too long w/ not much action going on... (movement, change of scenes, etc)
As it is... bleh.
Oh and the music was aite. (though didn't like it when they were sitting in the grass after shyro got hit or w/e)
H-Saito responds:
Okay, even if you just say my flash is a little crappy... Thanks, anyway... I know why... I'll do my best next time... And I did sort of in LolRag6 that I'm submitting now...