Yeah, the loader girl.
Heh, quite good idea that loader girl.
Graphics could be improved, try making narrower lines and smoother animation. The black what-ever-you-call-them effects between scenes looked stupid because they were jerky, tween it. Actually putting menu items in the menu on the wall was a good idea, though it distracted a bit, maybe lines would have been enough. The style is good, just make the graphics a little smoother and it's better. Good choices of music, I didn't really like the music that much, but still good. Actual sounds would've been nice. The plot was way too short and not very great but it was still a lot better than no plot at all. Work a little more on your next flash and it will be better. Overall good enough, 3/5.