Howdy peoples.
This is my second SOP. you seemed to somewhat like the first so I made this one. Just to keep at it in flash. It's quality is a bit better and Yes the art is suppose to look like that, cheesey. So ..... REVIEW! Tell me what you liked and or disliked about it.
Hmmm....
Well, I do get the joke, but it's not particularly funny. It came off as a little awkward, not in a good way. I think that things like timing, and some sort of flow would be essential in a joke like this.
The ol' turnaround gag requires you to catch someone by surprise, even shock them. But this...for whatever reason...didn't work.
You speak of Originality...
But sometimes originality isn't enough to make a good flash. You need the ability to draw and actually be funny. I can say, you failed both of these. The joke was lame, and would work as an inside joke at best, but this won't strike many viewers very well. Even the preparing of the joke was repeditive, which I thought impossible, for it only lasted about 5 seconds. You seem to have a natural talent for that.
...Maybe you just have a talent for NOT having talent, either way...
ok guy.
first of all your only 15? mabe thats the reason you didnt get the joke. let me explain it to you. in the back ground it says "Mr. Obvious" as in he says obvious things. so there for theres no GREAT punch line. Its just obvious. i think your just a bit to young to realize the joke. and the joke could go even deeper. but again your to young to comprehend.
oh... and here are your submissions? I'd love to see them.... Wait.... you have none . this is where you'll say "if i did submit something it would be better than your piece of shit!" well you see. the reason my piece of shit looks like that is because that's the way it's suppose to look.
love,
chris
ummmm???funny and ovious
lol i think i ll try your theory(just kidding)great movie :)!!!!!
What joke was there to get?
The only joke was how sad your animation was. And I say "was" because I'm sure it's going to get blammed very shortly.
you work at starbucks, therefore I can't acknowledge you.
Ha Ha No
Like the guy before me, that was shit.BLAM
You obviously didn't get the joke...