I liked the artwork and the music. Didn't so much understand the story.
could have been so much better
your graphics were great but lacking because you the style. it would have been WAY better if it had been a flowing piece of animation with a narrator overlaying the music. the way you had it broke it up to much, having to read 1/2 the time and watch broken sequences 1/2 the time just ruined the magic this piece easily could have had. if you really want to go the writing route make your screen size larger and show the animation the entire time with the text taking up the lower part of the screen as sliding text.
Where have I seen this before?
I really liked the Crow. It was a good movie about a reanimated corpse that goes out to seek revenge on those who wronged hom in life, unfortunatly, The Crow was not evolart's idea, and The Crow 2 is like the sequal to The Crow. Dude, get your own ideas, or write it as a parody, K?