Nice

This was cool. If you just put in a tiny bit more effort and such, it could get front page!

this has great potential!!

But the how you give up so easily really made this a dull movie, but it was original and it had so much potential. When you said To Be Continued....... Make the second one longer and more graphic-like. I really liked it though.

well

good nothing more to say a starit 9 and a 4/5 to you

excellent

This was a really good flash, no questions asked.

The drawings are quite nice!

And the animation is of an acceptable quality; so you are proficiend at the technical stuff. What you do fall short on is the scripting. The idea is good, but it was cut short, and was hindered by bad spelling and punctuation. Which is a shame.

A longer seqel with better plot would be awesome.