some advice
I like how the game is. The layers are so that things don't get in the way, and theres alot of options, but theres tons of room for inprovement. Firstly you can create an animation in a movie clip, this will cause a loop, thus making things like an animated backround. If you don't know how to do that, just make a new layer, draw a starting frame, click on it then convert it to a movie clip. Next click on the clip twice amd then you can edit with in the clip, and once your done animating just return to the scene. This can be used for almost everything. Next your missing sounds, you can use stream sounds, or loop sounds to make it work. Just inport a song, not alot of effort and it makes your flash, just that much better. Lastly you can create different dressups on different frames, just make something to switch frames, probibally a button, and then you can squeze in a whole lot more content. Right now your flash is okay but it is doubtfull it will pass, so keep on trying and keep these things in mind!