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My Creations 5: S.E.

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In the world of bad animation, comes my creations 5!
AGAIN!

anyways, this is the final character flash, until i make a flashh featuring MOST of the characters.

enjoy the flash, there is a bonus feature too :D.

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Haha

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was good but at the sametime it was confusing, i still liked all the differant characters and the neato music, keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation like stuff

~~OVERALL~~
A funny yet odd flash

~X~

graphics is your downfall

-GOOD-
wel i liked the song from "say something" but it didn't have anything to do with you characters or anything. there also is that interactivity.

-BAD-
well the characters are still drawn bad, if you drew better characters then mabye it would be interesting.

-OVERALL-
ok flash

Element responds:

thanks for the review man. i cant draw. lol. maybe sprites are for me...

Need improvment

Good presentation but the graphics were pretty bad. The sound was ok. Ill look forward for your real animation with al lthose characthers. Try to improve your graphics.

2/5

-AAF-

Element responds:

thanks for the review, i try and try to make full bodies, but its impossible, my friend can draw them, but not animate them.

Pretty bad.

The drawings have not improved at all since the first 'episode' of your creations. They look like they took you a minute, or less, each. Im sure you can do better. However, I did like the way the backgrounds were animated when they were changing.

Also, this is starting to get repetetive. You could have put all of these into one flash. There is virtually no difference between them. The only thing is they have different drawings.

The music suits the flash slightly more, as it is more robotic sounding, which goes with the machine theme of the menues. Still, it doesn't quite work.

So to improve, you need to make some major changes. The most noteable being your drawing ability. Buy a wacom tablet if you can draw better by hand than with a mouse.

Element responds:

lol, sorry.

The music was the best thing.....

I have to say it was simple and it was decent. The best part of the animation was the music!! It rocked.........I would like to ask you to post it in the audio section........I wanna listen to it from time to time. Peace out man!!!

Element responds:

its not my music.

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Jul 27, 2006
10:00 AM EDT