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Hellkid

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My 1st flash ever! It's not what you would call fantastic stuff, but ma lil bro thought it was good so i decided to post. Enjoy!

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good first, although large filesize

Leo-Leonardo-3rd responds:

Thnx for all these reviews ppl, just to get this straight this was supposed to be just a trailer, the first episode of the series is in the making, so there aint supposed to be a storyline for this one. thanks for all the advice though, its helpin out a lot ^.^

nah

you should try, creating a few sites and then deleting them. so you dont have to submit you're very first one.

Leo-Leonardo-3rd responds:

how about....no.

nice for a first

nice job for first...you get a 2 for me

awsome first

THE GOOD

Smooth. Anime style. Good sound quality. Overall wasome first flash.

THE BAD

Large filesize. You used to many gradients, and gradients dont look profesional unless used the right way.

IMPROVEMENTS

Lower the sound quality just a bit to lower the file size.

It was good.

For your first flash, it was pretty good. The sound was good and the graphics were smooth. You just need to work on your fire and your explosions.

Good job! 3/5

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Jul 27, 2006
7:45 AM EDT