Where to begin?

I really liked your animation. There are some problems though.

First off, (as others have said,) the voices, and the way you showed who was speaking sucked. Really bad. Consult some voice actors or something.

Second, you could develop the plot more.

Third, and most important, don't use the publish feature on flash to export your animation. Use the EXPORT feature. (File>Export>Export Movie) It'll come up with a list of things to do, pretty basic though, you can just leave the settings on it alone and export it like that.

Fourth, I'm looking forward to the next installment.

That kinda sucked...

Sorry dude, but that just flat out stunk. It could have been longer and way better. The story hasn't really gone anywhere, and the voices stunk. To top it off, whenever someone spoke, the microphone think popped up over their head!

it was nice

it was ok the voices is what got me good job man

ok

it was ok it wouldve have been alot better with real voices not computer though, well good luck on ur next one

LOSE, not loose

please just use real voices, computerized ones are... terrible