Good for a first...
But increase the framerate and make it longer.
*Update* YAY It didnt get blammed. Thank you Jesus lol.
Since my first flash was a 6 frame piece of crap that went to the obits in 3 mins flat, i made a decision to start over. This is really my first flash but much better with audio and credits. I know it may not be good and i know the audios kinda fuzzy but its my first REAL one so dont blame me please. Enjoy Newgrounds.
Good for a first...
But increase the framerate and make it longer.
Hmm
It's not too bad for a first real flash, but some advice for the future: People are tired of movies that are just sprites and stickmen fighting. Comedy, in general, fares a lot better. You did a fair job with the sprite manipulation except the looping background's a bit too obvious. It's better than most of the turds that come through the portal, but don't get too upset if it gets blammed or turd of the week.
'tis good.
I reckon this is good enough to survive.
This makes poop look good
Seriously, the music is completely out of place there. You just made a sprite flash movie with a cool music, using a cool charater and making up some stupid fight. But seriously, the music there, it's a no go. But don't lose hope! With some luck, this will be the next Turd of the Week, if it even gets there.
well not bad
for first real flash it's kind of good so you'r protected by me ;)