...NO PLOT, AND YET KIND OF FUNNY...
( THE REVIEW ) :
I like the pre-laoder (kind of), and the background was pretty cool, too. I thought this could have been logner, though, and you could have amde it not a loop. I guess this flash was kind of funny, too.
( IMPROVING ) :
Make this have mroe of a plot, and make it not a loop!
( OVERALL ) :
A flash without a plot, but is still kind of funny.