A review by Eric Bauman

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This is one of my first flashes, it isn't the most wonderful flash ever made, in fact far from, but of my other ones I believed this to be submit-worthy. I worked hard on it & I hope you enjoy watching it as much as I did making it. Watch the whole thing, please don't auto-vote. I suggest you go and watch the flash movie that this is reviewing here; http://ebaumsworldsucks.
com/ebaum.swf (If you havn't seen it, you may not get some of the comments... or wisecracks morelike)


He said that?

The audio was true, and hilarious. Unfortunately, but he didn't do anything but stand there and there was no lip-sync so that made graphics suffer a few points. You really don't need violence or interactivity in this. As a total you get an 8, would be a 10 if you had worked on the graphics a bit more, but still pretty good. I think you should add a link to the song, incase someone hasn't seen it.

P.S. He never denied the male prostitutes.

linktwin responds:

Good idea. I'll do that now. Thanks for the review ^_^


you need to animate his mouth(properly) and also make him move around a bit(like scratch himself or something) just to keep people interested.

Half a thumb up

This essentially was audio with some comments on the side. I like seeing eBaums World being mocked so I was generous in giving this 2 but if you are to remake something like this lip sync it and do something with it, make him move around or anything hey otherwise it's jsut a stream of audio.


linktwin responds:

I'll make that a priority. I will have it lip synced and with movement. (while keeping the comments :D)

although u didnt bother syncing it

the points you raise are valid and the world should hear this. maybe u should try syncing in future tho

linktwin responds:

yeah, I will try to sync the next one... When I played it though, when I pressed stop the sound continued... :S I will try the advice the last person gave me, and hopefully that will work for my next one. If it does it will be properly synced and not just a shabby animation attempting (poorly) to create an illusion of syncing. Thanks for the review, the points I raise are valid (I think) and it would be great if the world heard this. (and saw these points as valid.) It would be awesome if it ended up on ebaumsworldsucks.com ^_^

Nice work!!

Nice work, man... I liked the way you draw the guy, but didn't that much about his mouth... You could have done better... Another thing that appened here was the sound stop playing before his mouth. That is, the guy continued talking, but there was no sound... And the text on he left wasn't appearing accordingly with the sound... In Flash try to put the sound has "stream", 'cause I think that's the problem with your flash animation...
This is a constructive review... It's for you to continue! It was a funny movie after all!!
Hope to see more of that work!...


linktwin responds:

I dunno why the sound was that out of sync... oh well, I'll have to do that next time. thanks for the advice! :)

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3.68 / 5.00

Jul 25, 2006
5:35 AM EDT
Comedy - Parody