This is awesome. really you have to see this. its smooth and well animated. this is
a Must-Watch. Really it is. everyone on the internet should watch this.
It seems that all of the authors are fairly new to animating. I like the idea that you use a collab to practice, but in all of honesty it wasn't a good one. It sort of hurt my eyes trying to make out what was the line and what was the BG. Plus you mostly just used black, the lines din't move too smoothly, and it was nothing but lines, not really any recognizable shapes. Im sorry to say that it's not a good animation, but it is a good start. Keep practicing on your own then wait a while for another collab. I don't doubt that some good animation could come out of you in the future.
just plain boring.
wasn't great, however, you>sunshine crew