Good Potential

Really sharp writing. I think, anyway. It was difficult to make out a lot of it because the voice acting was inconsistent. Not that the voices were bad, but maybe the microphones used were bad.
I liked the style as well: black and white on a purple background. Where did you get the idea? Obviously work on lip syncing. If it's your style, that's fine, but it doesn't allow for much expression and so is kinda limiting. Lip syncing will get you higher scores too.
I look forward to seeing more of these!

[high fives the submission]

5.5

A beginning of a new series consisting of very classic styled designed characters that take a certain sense of design of some old school beatnick styles. The backgrounds are definately my favorite part of the movie - very simple. The audio really could use some work. There are a few "huffs" on the microphone, were it seems the mic was breathed on with the main character. I do not like the voice of Junior at all. This series shows a lot of potential, it's an interesting series with a lot of quirks.

ry

don't listen to these fools

twas a beautiful flash that suffers from bad sound. story was a little opinionated and dry, but it was more interesting than some others i've seen tonight :P

Just the sound...

There were some serious mic issues. I had a very hard time listening to Junior, but other than that it seemed pretty good. Maybe you could even update this flash with better sound quality, if it gets blammed.

I liked it

At times, i coulnd't understand what Junior was saying. Still, i liked it.