Really sharp writing. I think, anyway. It was difficult to make out a lot of it because the voice acting was inconsistent. Not that the voices were bad, but maybe the microphones used were bad.
I liked the style as well: black and white on a purple background. Where did you get the idea? Obviously work on lip syncing. If it's your style, that's fine, but it doesn't allow for much expression and so is kinda limiting. Lip syncing will get you higher scores too.
I look forward to seeing more of these!
[high fives the submission]