hahahahha

those clay men are stooges i love it lol

Pretty good

I've tried clay animation and I know its time consuming but I must admit you have got skill. If you add some form of story it could actually be quite good.

Sorry, but its just not good enough

If you post a Claymation on Newgrounds, you should know, it has to be good. I mean, your talking about being compared to Knox, and if you can't come close to his humor and style, then your bound to get some bad reviews. Really I would like to see more Claymations from you guys but you need to work on:

I. Your characters and the way you mold the clay.

II. The sound, and the voices, they just don't cut it.

III. The story, it has to have a point.

IV. The entertainment value, it has to be funny, otherwise... well your screwed and your chances at getting a good review go down the drain.

V. The video quality needs to be improved if you want to be serious about it, if your just doing it for something fun to waste your time on, then fine, but don't expect good feedback.

VI. I love roman numerals...

VII. This one is pointless too, but anyway, seriously consider what I've mentioned. If you really like making claymations and you want to be good at it, you have to work it out and improve on your work after every step.

Hope to see more, just better next time.

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its alrite but this is newgrounds its for flashes not claymations

Claymation

I didn'y yhink it was very funny and to be perfectly honest with you I don't know why people alway smake claymation movies with those retarded generic looking clay people. It is very irritating.