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(( LOL Interesting ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was entertaining it was abit small, and needs to have more scenes, the odd looking character was interesting though, but other then that it could use abit more effort and time on it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, maybe some more story and understanding to it.

~~OVERALL~~
Abit short and interesting though.

~X~

K

^^Good Points^^
This made me smile. I liked the late onset music, it was a pretty good choice, especially since it is an uplifting tune, and then the ending just really ruins the mood, which just makes it funnier. I thought this was a pretty neat tale. The drawings were pretty good. I especially liked the drawings of the people. They were some odd people...lol. Nice job!

^^Needs Improving^^
Your drawings lack a lot of detail. For example, when the plane is flying in, all the building are simply just gray rectangles. You could get a little more creative with that part and many others in this movie.

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+COMMENTS+:

The music was pretty good in this flash, and the graphics and style weren't bad, I guess. Like the last reviewer, I thought that the ending was pretty good.

+IMPROVING+:

Also as the last reviewer mentioned, maybe you could gibve it more of a plot. Also, maybe you could make it a little bit longer.

2/5

Pretty Good

i liked the ending.Maybe you should try making a longer flash of this with a storyline?

Nice

I liked the anti-climatic ending.

Credits & Info

Views
1,646
Votes
10
Score
3.06 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 12, 2006
4:11 PM EDT