(( Could be improved on ))

~~REVIEW~~
notbad on a story part but the graphics could use some improving, more detail in the characters and the backrounds would be nice aswell, but its notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More visuall graphics are needed aswell as some compression.

~~OVERALL~~
intersting animation but needs more detail.

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it is good but, the text is too fast. try to fix that.

Ummmm.. No

That wasnt a flash, it was lyrics to that crappy song over pictures of cities that you probably found on google. Try using your own stuff next time.

You should really concider making a pre-loader

Hi there...you. Just wanted to write to say that you should, as the text above implies, make a pre-loader, i had to wait every fifth second for it to load another 5 seconds...Other than that...um, well i'm gonna be honest and tel you that this really isn't my kind of movie...but if it were i'd tell you that it's a little stale and you should spice it up a notch.

Um....

Yay for paning pictures.....and...words..... then insert smiley face.... the end was kinda funny.....

Anyway to the Constructivity part.

If you want to put the lyrics on screen I would put them at the bottom as subtitles. I couldn't see them very well and I wasn't about to strain my eyes looking at them.

Eh... If nothing else bitmap trace the pictures. It'll at least add some variety... Perhaps you could put a tweening squi-..... but I jest. I kinda like that odd flavor bitmap tracing adds.

Kudos to making it for your lady-type-friend. It's always good to show your appreciation to your significant other being...thing... Sorry I just don't see how "significant other" works... so I'll just say girlfriend. Even though I have many friends who are women. Thus making a-friend-who's-a-girl a commonly used phraze for me. Honestly it would be much easier calling them girlfriends. Maybe we should come up with new words for "Girlfriend" and "Boyfriend" so we don't struggle with those odditys of the english language.

In any case, ad a song that's a little less fruity, so I don't feel like I'm in a gay bar. I'm not saying throw in a hardcore love song (*coughpunkrocklovecough*) but pick one that isn't the Jamacian version of Michael Bolton.

Aaaannyyyway. Even if you can't draw well (I can't) there's no shame in drawing crappy pictures. Because in theroy if it has a good message it should do good on NG..... Or... If it's completely retarted, has no point, and really should be blammed, but it can't be because you have a bunch of equally retarted friends... but I'm just blabering.