Yay for paning pictures.....and...words..... then insert smiley face.... the end was kinda funny.....
Anyway to the Constructivity part.
If you want to put the lyrics on screen I would put them at the bottom as subtitles. I couldn't see them very well and I wasn't about to strain my eyes looking at them.
Eh... If nothing else bitmap trace the pictures. It'll at least add some variety... Perhaps you could put a tweening squi-..... but I jest. I kinda like that odd flavor bitmap tracing adds.
Kudos to making it for your lady-type-friend. It's always good to show your appreciation to your significant other being...thing... Sorry I just don't see how "significant other" works... so I'll just say girlfriend. Even though I have many friends who are women. Thus making a-friend-who's-a-girl a commonly used phraze for me. Honestly it would be much easier calling them girlfriends. Maybe we should come up with new words for "Girlfriend" and "Boyfriend" so we don't struggle with those odditys of the english language.
In any case, ad a song that's a little less fruity, so I don't feel like I'm in a gay bar. I'm not saying throw in a hardcore love song (*coughpunkrocklovecough*) but pick one that isn't the Jamacian version of Michael Bolton.
Aaaannyyyway. Even if you can't draw well (I can't) there's no shame in drawing crappy pictures. Because in theroy if it has a good message it should do good on NG..... Or... If it's completely retarted, has no point, and really should be blammed, but it can't be because you have a bunch of equally retarted friends... but I'm just blabering.