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experiment 2

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A small pointless animation

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(( STRANGE AND SHORT ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was strange and short, good effects though with the lazer and the creepy laugh, it was funny though, i had a fun time with it but wish it was longer and made more sense somehow, anyways it was interesting.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content and with more understanding.

~~OVERALL~~
Very strange and short, it was kinda neat though.

~X~

FireHound responds:

ok I'll try to work on that!

erm....

I didnt really understand what was going on in the flash at all, and in agreement with previous comments the lack of play button really bothers me too. This wasn't a bad video if you didnt put much time in it but is way below expectations if you actually tried hard on this...the biggest problem is the pointlessness and plotlessness (if those are words) of the movie...was that a snake that got stepped on or a worm with bones? and why the heck did they start multiplying? I suppose you called it randomness but still...my favorite part of this was the sound due to the spooky laugh of the thing at the end...put some effort into your next flash and you might have and interesting story going

FireHound responds:

It happens... sometimes I just start screwing around in flash... wondering what things would like look.. and then in the end when the overall look isn't too crappy, I just dump it on newgrounds :)
And yes, that was a worm. The bones came from the foot.
I'll try to my best next time ;)

what I saw

--- I HATE the auto-starting of movies. Put in a play button after the pre-loader. Even though it's short, I wasn't expecting it to actually start without a prompt from me, so I missed the first half first time around.

(Watched it a couple of times after anyway.)

--- HAving an icon that's not part of the movie seems a crappy thing to do. I was expecting cubes, and was disappointed.

- When the floor moves, the piles of bones don't move exactly with it - they seem to slide slightly.

++ The end 'creature' is kinda freaky, in a good way.

+++ Short and unpredictable.

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Not much here, but I kinda enjoyed what I saw. Could be a lot more brushed up though.

FireHound responds:

I often forget to place a play button... yeah, the icon.. well, random movie... random icon :) hehe.
saw the floor-moving thing myself too, too lazy to correct it.. just a crappy flash anyways:)
was planning to make the creature move but... takes time and didn't think this movie would be worth it
well, short and unpredictable, don't know if that's a positive thing :)

thanks for the extended review

cool

woot randomness if you have another experiment put in a couple of hair nets thx

FireHound responds:

hair nets? euh, ok :p

yes

i agree, the results conclude that agreement is the most likely result so agreeing now would remove the need for later agreement. i also believe that the anomily which presented itself upon the first experiment should be taken into account. excluding the fact that the logic was not present then agreement should be agreed to.

FireHound responds:

hmm, yes... sure... I guess?

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3.10 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 2, 2006
10:45 AM EDT